Audience Comments & Feedbacks

Focus Group Feedback In Class:
I asked the group what were my strengths and weaknesses on my final media product

Specific Strengths:

Person A - The genre is clear 
Person B - The title is unique
Person C - Colour scheme and house style structure 
Person D - Photography overall in the media product

Specific Weaknesses:

Person A - The colour scheme is a little too bright.
Person B - Contents page does not have much images.
Person C -  Double page spread has too much text and cannot be read. 

How does my final product compare to my draft and plan:

Person A - The draft does not have journalistic writing. The final product does and it is different and humorous.
Person B - The draft and plan for the double pages spread is not sketched or planned out but the article is good and well understood.
Person C - The contents page and front cover best compares with the case study which you researched and planned in the beginning 
Person D -  The effort in the overall product and the teasers are different. 

I have analysed this feedback and I will take on board the following weaknesses the colour scheme is too bright, I will add more images to the contents to make it more interesting. I will make my journalism engaging and visual.